Title: Beta
By: Rhardin
Summary: Nick learns all about Slash and beta's!!
Note: This is done for my lovely beta. you truely make my fics rock my dear. I hope you know how much i need you. You are the best of the best. Thanks so much ScarletFBL!!!!
Fandom: CSI: Vegas
Characters: Nick, Greg
Genres: AU
Rating: NC17
Warnings: none
Greg looked up and smiled as Nick put his arms around him and kissed him on the cheek.
"There, all done," Greg said, leaning back into Nick.
"All done with what?" Nick asked, pulling him close, his head right up next to Greg.
"I'm done with my masterpiece," Greg said, taking Nick's hand. He was beaming now.
"Masterpiece?" Nick pulled away. He pulled up another chair and slid it close to Greg's. Greg reached over and took his hand.
"I can't tell you," Greg said.
"Why not?" Nick asked, not moving. "I wanna know."
"No," Greg said, looking down.
"Come on, babe, just tell me. I want to know," Nick said, very close to Greg's ear.
"Ok, my slash story," Greg said ,still smiling. "It's hot."
"'Slash story'?" Nick said.
"God, you are so lame, hon," Greg said. "Slash is a story about two guys that, well... you know, do it," Greg said.
"Oh," Nick said. "Can I read it?"
"You want to read my story?" Greg asked, almost in a squeal.
"Well, only if you don't do that again," Nick said, rubbing his ear. Greg jumped up and threw his arms around Nick and kissed him.
"What was that for?" Nick asked as Greg sat on his lap.
"'Cause you're the best, Nick. I thought you'd make fun of me, or be mad," he said.
"Why would I be mad?" Nick asked. "It sounds kind of hot."
Greg smiled and opened his story.
"Now, don't say anything about the errors," he said. "I just sent it to my beta."
"Beta?" Nick asked, facing his lover.
"Yeah. Someone that proof reads my stuff and fixes my errors," he said.
"Oh, I see," Nick said. "So, can I read it now?"
"Yeah, go head," Greg said, now standing. He walked behind Nick.
"What? Are you nervous?" Nick asked.
"No...maybe...yeah," Greg said, getting on Nick's lap. "I just want you to like it."
'Rick walked over to Craig and put his arms on him and took a hold of his beat loop'
"Rick and Craig?" Nick asked.
"Well, I didn't want to use our names," Greg said, blushing a bit.
"You sure you're not just wishing it was Warrick you were with?" Nick asked, raising an eyebrow.
"See? I knew you would make fun of me!" Greg said, trying to get up. He put his hand over the screen. Nick grabbed him and pulled the smaller man back down.
"I'm sorry, I won't do it again," Nick said.
"Ok, one last chance, mister," Greg said, removing his hand. Nick took a hold of it and placed it on his lap.
"Hmm, someone's excited," he said. Greg blushed again.
"This is very hot, you reading my stuff," he said.
"Ok, shh, don't talk to me anymore," Nick said, facing the computer again.
'Rick walked over to Craig and put his arms on him and took a hold of his beat loop. He placed his hands on his ass and they both backed up to the bed. Rick placed his hand on Craig's chest and pushed him onto the bed. Craig put his hands under his head and smiled at Rick. Rick climbed on top of Craig and lowered down, kissing him on the neck a few times. He undid the button of his pants and unzipped them, showing of Craig's white boxer shorts. Craig lifted his ass in the air, so Rick could slide his pants down. He tossed the pants onto the floor ran his hands along the band of his shorts and few times.
Rick lowered down and kissed the love on the lips. Craig took his hand and took a hold of Rick pants and undid them. Rick deepened the kiss and Craig slide is hands on it his short and took a hold of his dick. He cupped it in his hand and squeezed it.
Rick gasped and pulled away for Craig.
"I want you to fuck me" Craig said. "I want you inside me" he pulled his hands out of Rick's shorts and slide his jeans and underwear down his legs. Rick kicked them off sending them falling to the floor. Rick slide his hands into Craig boxers and slide them off tossing them on the floor.
Rick reached for the lube as Craig lifted himself up just a bit. He placed his on hand in his mouth as Rick coated his finger with lube. He placed his finger at his hole and slowly pushed it in. Craig arched up.
"Oh fuck me Nick, fuck me hard" Craig said.
Rick smiled and slide in a second finger.
"I don't want that I want you" Craig called up. He reached down and took ahold of Rick's dick and ran his hand up and down it.
"I'm ready I'm ready" he cried "Please fuck me"
Rick again kissed Craig and slide his finger out of him. He again got the lube and coated his dick with lots of lube.
"That's what I want, Nick."
"You put my name, hon," Nick said, looking up.
"Oh, my beta's good. She never misses anything," Greg said. Nick had his hands inside Greg's pants now, and was rubbing him up and down. Greg could barely speak to him.
'Rick helped Craig lift himself up and put the tip of his dick at Craig hole. He took ahold of his hand and started to push himself inside him.
Craig arched up. "Fuck yeah Ricky god, you feel so good" he yelled as Nick slide more of himself in there.
"This is from last night," Nick said, his voice very deep now.
Greg only nodded as Nick's hand slid up and down him.
'Craig lifted his legs up and rested him on Rick shoulder so he could go even deep. Rick hips moved back and forth. Craig called up each him Nick balls slammed into him.
"Fuck me" Craig yelled. "Oh fuck"
Rick took Greg's cock in his hand and slide it up and down.
"Oh fuck, oh shit" Craig yelled as Rick's hands slide up and down him, his dick going deeper and deeper into him.
"Oh going to cum Rick"
Rick pulled up and let Craig leg fall to the ground. He got on top of him and as Craig took a hold of his dick and Rick graded his. They slide each others hands up and down each other.
"Shit" Craig called out as his came all over Rick's hands.
Rick arched back and closed his eyes as Craig's juices ran all over his hand. Rick leaned back and bit them fell forward landing onto of Craig.
"Oh god that is the shit" Craig said placing his hands on Rick's ass.
"Hmm" Rick said.
"We should shower hon, we are all dirty"
Rick didn't move. Craig smiled and kissed him on the slide of the face.
"Ok well shower later" he said closing his eyes.'
"Shit, Greg," Nick said, out of breath. He wiped his face off.
"Did you like that?" Greg asked
Nick looked at him and pulled him close. He kissed him and lifted him up. He carried him into the bed and got on top of him. Their clothes were ripped off with frantic hands and then Nick turned Greg around.
"Oh, doggie style. I haven't written about that one, yet," Greg said as Nick pushed inside of him.
Later that day
Greg lifted his head up.
"Nick, get off me," he said, trying to move. Nick's legs were tangled up with his.
"Nick, I have to pee. Move!" He said, pushing him.
"Ok," Nick said as they both worked to untangle their limbs. Greg jumped out of bed and rushed into the bathroom. Nick rolled onto his side and smiled at Greg as he walked back into the room.
"Let's see if she's done my story, yet," Greg said, taking Nick's arm, trying to pull him up.
"I'm still tired," Nick said.
"Don't you want to see the finished product?" Greg asked.
"You sent it, like, five hours ago, how do you know...wait, 'she'?" Nick asked.
"Yeah, my beta is a girl," Greg said, pulling on Nick's arm again. Nick gave in and let Greg pull him up. He stood up and walked over to the computer.
"She's the best there is, and she's so fast. I swear, if I weren't gay, I'd marry her!" Greg said, sitting down.
"Hmm, should I start to worry?" Nick asked, sitting on him.
"Nick, please, she doesn't have a dick," Greg said. "And she's not you."
Nick smiled.
"Oh, look. She's, God, she's the best! She's done it already," Greg said, clicking on the e-mail.
Nick laced his hands around Greg's
"Wow, Greg, that was really not! I loved it. Can't wait for your next story! Keep them coming, my dear! Hee hee!
n_n""
'Rick walked over to Craig and put his arms around him, taking a hold of his belt loops. He placed his hands on his backside and they both backed up until they came to a stop next to the bed. Rick placed his hand on Craig's chest and pulled his closer, and as he did, they both fell onto the bed. Craig put his hands under his head and smiled up at his lover. He climbed on top of Craig and lowered down, placing a soft kiss on the side of his neck. He undid the button of his pants and unzipped them, exposing Craig's white boxers. Craig lifted himself so Rick could remove his jeans. He tossed the unwanted clothing onto the floor. He ran his hand along the band of his shorts and few times.
Rick lowered down, kissing his lover on the lips. Craig lifted his hand and took a hold of Rick's pants, and undid button of his fly. Rick deepened the kiss and Craig slid his hands into his boxers and took a hold of his cock. He cupped it in his hand, stroking it. Rick came to life beneath his touch.'
"Why do girls always use the work 'cock'? It is what it is. It's a dick, and dick's aren't that pretty," Nick said.
"I guess it sound's better. I think mostly girls read this stuff, anyway. She knows what she's doing," Greg said. "Shh, I'm reading."
"Sorry," Nick said.
'Rick gasped and lifted up off of Craig just a bit.
"I want you," Craig said. "I want you inside me." He pulled his hands out of Rick's boxers and slid his jeans and underwear down his legs. Rick kicked them off, sending them falling onto the floor. Rick slid his hands underneath the band of Craig's boxers and slid them off as well.
Rick reached for the lube as Craig lifted himself up just a bit. He placed his on hand in his mouth, sucking on his own fingers as Rick coated his fingers with lube. Rick placed a finger at his entrance and slowly slid them inside, helping his lover to relax. Craig arched up at the new feeling inside him.
"God, Rick, I want you so much! I love you baby," Craig said.
Rick smiled, and, once Craig relaxed, he placed a second finger inside his lover.
"I don't want that, I want you!" Craig said. He reached down and took a hold of Rick's now rock hard cock and ran his hand up and down it.
"I'm ready! I'm ready!" He cried out. "Please, take me!"
Rick kissed Craig again and pulled his fingers out of him. He picked up the lube and coated himself with it.
"God, I want you, Rick!" Craig said, still sucking on his fingers.
Craig lifted up, offering himself to his lover. Rick put the tip of his cock where his fingers once were. He took a hold of Craig's hand and started to push himself inside of him, going slowly at first. He wanted to make sure that lover was loose enough.
Craig arched up again. "Yeah, Ricky! God, you feel so good!" He yelled as Rick slid more of himself inside.'
"Hmm...." Nick said.
"What?" Greg said, looking over at him.
"She took some of your stuff out. I know you used the work 'fuck' a few times."
"Well, it's her job to make it sound better," Greg said. "Shut up and keep reading!"
"Ok," Nick said, smiling.
'Craig lifted his legs up and rested him on Rick's shoulders, so he could go even deeper inside him. Rick's hips moved back and forth. Craig called out each time Rick went even deeper.
"Oh, God, baby! That's what I want!" Craig yelled. "Oh, God!"
Rick took Craig's cock in his hand and ran his hand up and down it, making sure to squeezed the tip.
"Oh, yeah, that's it, Rick!" Craig yelled as his hands slid up and down him. He tried to match the speed of Rick's hand with his hips.
"Oh, baby, I'm close!" Rick called out.
Rick slid back and pulled out, letting Craig's legs fall from his shoulders. He climbed on top of him and took a hold of his shaft again, and Craig grabbed his. They slid their hands up and down each other.
"Shit!" Craig cried out as his came all over Rick's hands.
Rick arched back and closed his eyes as Craig's juices ran all over his hand. Rick leaned back and bit, then fell forward, landing on top of Craig.
"Oh, God, that was amazing," Craig said, placing his hands on Rick's ass.
"Mmm," Rick said.
"We should shower, hon. We are all dirty," Craig said, trying to lift his tired lover off of him.
Rick didn't move. Craig smiled and kissed him on the side of the face.
"Ok, we'll shower once we've rested," he said, closing his eyes. '
"See? Now that was good!" Greg said, smiling.
Nick smiled and kissed him. "You look like a proud papa. Now what?"
"Now, I post it," Greg said
"Where do you post it at?" Nick asked
"Only the best site in the world," Greg said. "Here, I'll show you." He pulled up the site. "I have a lot of fans."
"I can't believe never told me about this!" Nick said.
"I'm sorry," Greg said. "Will you forgive me?"
"Hmm, I guess," Nick said. "What's is a 'review'?" He asked.
"It's the best part," Greg said. He clicked on one.
'G-man that was so hot. Your stuff drives me insane. Write more soon!'
"G-man?" Nick asked.
"It's my pen name," Greg said.
"See, I used to write and post my stuff before I found my beta, and I'd get stuff like 'you need a beta, too many errors!' But, since I found her, I haven't gotten one review like that," Greg said, gushing on and on.
Nick smiled again.
"What?" Greg asked.
"I love it when you smile like that," Nick said, pulling him close.
Greg looked down. "So, now, I post it and we wait and see if anyone likes it."
Nick nodded and watched Greg go to work.
"Well, I'm going to shower," Nick said, standing up.
"I'll join you," Greg said, following him.
"I was hoping you would," Nick said, pulling him close again.
Later that Night
"Nick!" Greg screamed. Nick came running into the living room, his pants half up.
"Fuck, Greg, don't do that again! I thought you were hurt!" He said, pulling his pants up.
"Sorry. I got four reviews," Greg said, smiling.
"Oh, really?" Nick said, walking over to him. He had to fight off the urge to slap Greg.
'I loved it! That was so hot. I love how quiet and calm Rick is.'
'Your stuff is always so hot. Can't wait for more.'
'I loved that. Want more of it. Rick is so fun to read about!'
'I love how Craig is a talker and Rick is just taking it all in. Nice work. I need more Craig and Rick. Hurry with more. Please! I'll just die without it!'
"Why, Nick, I believe you are blushing," Greg said, pulling him close.
"Me? Nooo!" He said.
"See? They love to read about us," Greg said.
"So, you....what's next?" Nick asked.
"Hmm, I don't know. The shower or doggie style," Greg asked, looking at Nick
"The shower," Nick said, pushing him. "Come on, we are going to be late for work."
"Oh, I got one more review," Greg said.
"Read it later," Nick said. "We're going to be late."
The Lab
Gil sat back and smiled.
'G-man, that was so good. I can't wait for more. Don't keep on old man waiting too long. I look forward to more.'
"Gil, everyone waiting for you."
"Sorry," Gil said, turning off his computer. "I'm on my way." He smiled and followed Greg to the break room. He wiped his face a few times.
"You ok?" Greg asked.
"I'll be right there. I have to use the restroom," Gil said.
"I'll let them know," Greg said.
Gil let out a deep breath and walked into the restroom.
"G-man." He smiled and entered a stall.
Nick walked into the break room and sat down next to Sara. She closed the laptop.
"What's that all about?" he asked.
"Nothing" she said smiling. "Just betaing a story for someone."
Nick swollowed and looked at her.
"What did you say" he asked.
"Betaing a story" she said.
"Oh." he said sitting back.
"Do you even know what a beta is?" she asked.
"Nope, are you going to tell me?" he asked wiping his face.
"Nope." she said sitting back and smiling.
A/N: I wrote this for my wonderful beta. I love her so much. I'd be lost without her. So, this is for you my dear. Keep on writing and loving the boys.
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